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DOFF STORY
I came at the Bus stop.
I saw men and women stood up.
i wondered what happened , because there was some sits free There was a mad man sat in a sit , he was sleeping.
No worry for me , .
He smelling very bad . i sat , Few minutes later the guy put his head on my shoulders , after in my knees .
Because he was sleeping , i found better don't to wake up him.
The fact is that some people was looking such i was just mad like a man .
But now i really wonder .
Who is the mad man ?

Judul
- DOFF STORY
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- I came at the Bus stop.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- I saw men and women stood up.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- i wondered what happened , because there was some sits free There was a mad man sat in a sit , he was sleeping.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
Kalimat 4
- No worry for me , .
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
Kalimat 5
- He smelling very bad . i sat , Few minutes later the guy put his head on my shoulders , after in my knees .
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
Kalimat 6
- Because he was sleeping , i found better don't to wake up him.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6
Kalimat 7
- The fact is that some people was looking such i was just mad like a man .
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7
Kalimat 8
- But now i really wonder .
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8
Kalimat 9
- Who is the mad man ?
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 9