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Text from Ignacio777 - English

The snife by Ignacio Bermúdez.
I walked the streets of the city and a man I push myself.
I fell to the floor.
I always carry with me a knife to protect myself from any criminal and that day was no exception.
I panicked and did not hesitate to stab in the chest.
He fell to the ground.
People started screaming as she attended.
I began to despair and I ran ... I was nervous.
I soon fainted.
I opened my eyes after a few minutes.
Her stomach bloodstained.
I looked back, a man ran ...

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- The snife by Ignacio Bermúdez.
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- I walked the streets of the city and a man I push myself.
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- I fell to the floor.
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- I always carry with me a knife to protect myself from any criminal and that day was no exception.
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- I panicked and did not hesitate to stab in the chest.
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- He fell to the ground.
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- People started screaming as she attended.
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- I began to despair and I ran ... I was nervous.
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- I soon fainted.
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- I opened my eyes after a few minutes.
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- Her stomach bloodstained.
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- I looked back, a man ran ...
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