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My best friends.
I want to tell you about my best freinds.
I'm freinds with each of them for 8 years.
They always support me.
When I'm sad they lift mood.
I love and appreciate them.

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- My best friends.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- I want to tell you about my best freinds.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm freinds with each of them for 8 years.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- They always support me.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- When I'm sad they lift mood.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I love and appreciate them.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5