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  • Eye language

  • Hi everyone I try to improve my English by writing about different things and as I don't have a good imagination I decided to write about different things from podcasts that I listen.
  • Today I'll try to retell you an article " Eye language " An interesting thing about eyes is that : when we look at something or someone we're interesting in our eye pupils dilate but if we look at something or someone unpleasant our eye pupils contract .
  • Also when we look at someone we subconsciously pay attention to pupil size .
  • An experiment was conducted : a group of men were shown a picture of women .
  • In half pictures a pupils size were made slightly bigger , in the other half of the picture a pupils size were made slightly smaller . the men were asked to choose a pictures of women that they like.
  • The result was amazing : the the very same women with larger pupils were more attractive and friendlier and at the same time the men couldn't explain why they chose those women .
  • Pupil response matter !
  • Pupil response test is used to determine a use of drug and tiredness of drivers on the highway.

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    • Hi everyone I try to improve my English by writing about different things and as I don't have a good imagination I decided to write about different things from podcasts that I listen.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
  • 문장 2
    • Today I'll try to retell you an article " Eye language " An interesting thing about eyes is that : when we look at something or someone we're interesting in our eye pupils dilate but if we look at something or someone unpleasant our eye pupils contract .
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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    • In half pictures a pupils size were made slightly bigger , in the other half of the picture a pupils size were made slightly smaller . the men were asked to choose a pictures of women that they like.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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    • The result was amazing : the the very same women with larger pupils were more attractive and friendlier and at the same time the men couldn't explain why they chose those women .
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
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