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  • waves

  • It is summer, the weather is nice, the sun is shining, it is hot, 30 degree or more, On my skin I feel a soft wind.
  • Sitting on a sand dune at the beach I stare at the ocean.
  • The water masses are moving, up and down, up and down.
  • The waves pushes forward and then breaking with a loud noise at the beach.
  • Every time little bit of water reaches my feet. It feels good.
  • The water is cold.
  • With my toe I drill into the wet sand, grab some sand and build a hill.
  • Then, the next wave flow over it, overcome my small little hill and the hill is gone.
  • Nothing remains.
  • Only sand everywhere, like before, like nothing had happened....

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