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Hi
Hi everyone!
My name is Mélissa, I'm 17 years and I live in East of France.
I'm here because i would like learn a better english.
I wish one day i'll travel in the world whole.
Have a good day. Bye.

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- My name is Mélissa, I'm 17 years and I live in East of France.
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- I'm here because i would like learn a better english.
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