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TO SMOKE
— Do you want to smoke?
—Not, I do not want to smoke, I want to dance.
—To dance? to dance with whom?
—I want to dance and sing whole day.

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- TO SMOKE
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句子 1
- — Do you want to smoke?
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句子 2
- —Not, I do not want to smoke, I want to dance.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- —To dance? to dance with whom?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- —I want to dance and sing whole day.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4