Corrections

Text from clavipes - English

  • Wind from Africa

  • I wake up, I dreamed.
  • My arms hurt and maybe also my head. I have thirst.
  • Three steps to the kitchen.
  • Here is a glass of yesterday with two dry lemon seeds inside.
  • Under the glass is sticking a young squashed cockroach. Never mind!
  • I have thirst and my arms hurt.
  • So I ingrain the water in this glass and I drink it.
  • What day is today?
  • Oh yes, now a coffee.
  • A pretty hot coffee would be very nice for me.
  • My head feels like a sponge without bones.
  • A sponge with milles of ants.
  • The blame has probably the hot wind.
  • Outside the sun is shining.
  • The horizone is fishy.
  • In the air hangs the smell of shower foam of the neighbour.
  • A child of the neighbourhood is screaming to her grandma.
  • Oh yes, the coffee feels so good.
  • I am totaly broken.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English