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  • The empty cabin - part 2

  • Benenuto in the first rung of the ladder of the entrace, looking alarmed the noisy people groups and watching the baggage man climp the ladder stern, leaned forward, with the his suitcase in the back: - Fortunately that group will stay here, If they were go to Santos, I give up of this trip.
  • Though still lacked 2 weeks for the carnival, there were in Rio de Janeiro, Mauá Square, Rio Branco Avenue, Getúlio Vargas Avenue, ornaments of the carnival such as strips involving poles and facades.
  • Also a collective party environment from saturday to wednesday. Josué Montello

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    • Benenuto in the first rung of the ladder of the entrace, looking alarmed the noisy people groups and watching the baggage man climp the ladder stern, leaned forward, with the his suitcase in the back: - Fortunately that group will stay here, If they were go to Santos, I give up of this trip.
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    • Though still lacked 2 weeks for the carnival, there were in Rio de Janeiro, Mauá Square, Rio Branco Avenue, Getúlio Vargas Avenue, ornaments of the carnival such as strips involving poles and facades.
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