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Why I want learn English .
Hi.
I live in Russia.
I want learn English , because it is nessesery in this time.
I think that English can help me in my feature job .
It can help me to build a good career.
If I will learn English I can traveling and find new friends without language barrier because English is international language .

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- Why I want learn English .
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句子 1
- Hi.
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句子 2
- I live in Russia.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I want learn English , because it is nessesery in this time.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I think that English can help me in my feature job .
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- It can help me to build a good career.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- If I will learn English I can traveling and find new friends without language barrier because English is international language .
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6