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  • It's More Important To Make New FriendsThan To Keep Old Friends

  • I believe that it is more important for a person to make new friends rather than keeping his old friends.
  • I believe this because there are lots of great people out there and we never had the chance to meet with them, also people tend to change through time and somtimes change the arena that they have been raised in, and it's vital for them to have new friends.
  • First, it is very essential that a person has to make new friends to meet and discover plenty of great people who never had the chance to sit and speak with in order to benefit from each other and share the good things between them.
  • For example, when I was at high school I had good friends, we enjoyed being close and helping each other.
  • However, this didn't last for so long especially when I started my undergraduate studies, and I was among alots of strangers, after a while I started speaking with some of the nice students who helped me alot either with the preperation for the classes or any problems that I had. they also tend to be more helpful in a sense where you feel that you're not alone and there are people around you who care about you.
  • Second, it is very important for an individual to have new friends rather than sticking to old friends because you will not live your entire life amongs them and may travel and change the place where you live and be around different people who are different from you whether in culture or in life style.
  • For instance, I remember when I was a kid I used to have lots of friends in my nighbors, we used to enjoy playing together all time and supporting each other in ease and difficulties.
  • However, after building a strong relashionship with them, I had to move to another city with my family, and emerge in a total society that I dont know any person in.
  • And it was really irritating of being alone most of the time, and not having friends who would share their time with you hanging out and helping each other.
  • Till the moment where I decided to make new frieneds which helped me alot of changing this hardship that I was going through, and I meet with a unique people that I never thought about.
  • To conclude, keeping old friends is a good thing.
  • However, it's not the case for most of the people, and that's why I believe it's much better for an individual to make new friends instead of limiting himself with his old friends.

VÆR SÅ SNILL, HJELP TIL MED Å RETTE HVER SETNING! - English

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    • I believe this because there are lots of great people out there and we never had the chance to meet with them, also people tend to change through time and somtimes change the arena that they have been raised in, and it's vital for them to have new friends.
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    • First, it is very essential that a person has to make new friends to meet and discover plenty of great people who never had the chance to sit and speak with in order to benefit from each other and share the good things between them.
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    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3
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    • However, this didn't last for so long especially when I started my undergraduate studies, and I was among alots of strangers, after a while I started speaking with some of the nice students who helped me alot either with the preperation for the classes or any problems that I had. they also tend to be more helpful in a sense where you feel that you're not alone and there are people around you who care about you.
      Stem nå!
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    • Second, it is very important for an individual to have new friends rather than sticking to old friends because you will not live your entire life amongs them and may travel and change the place where you live and be around different people who are different from you whether in culture or in life style.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 6LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 6
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    • For instance, I remember when I was a kid I used to have lots of friends in my nighbors, we used to enjoy playing together all time and supporting each other in ease and difficulties.
      Stem nå!
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    • However, after building a strong relashionship with them, I had to move to another city with my family, and emerge in a total society that I dont know any person in.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 8LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 8
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    • And it was really irritating of being alone most of the time, and not having friends who would share their time with you hanging out and helping each other.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 9LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 9
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    • Till the moment where I decided to make new frieneds which helped me alot of changing this hardship that I was going through, and I meet with a unique people that I never thought about.
      Stem nå!
    • LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 10LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 10
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    • However, it's not the case for most of the people, and that's why I believe it's much better for an individual to make new friends instead of limiting himself with his old friends.
      Stem nå!
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