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I really hate summer
I really really hate summer because I hate hot..
Actually I love winter and want to go to alaska I hope quickly pass summer

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- I really hate summer
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- I really really hate summer because I hate hot..
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句子 2
- Actually I love winter and want to go to alaska I hope quickly pass summer
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2