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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Tidak dapat dibatalkan

Teks daripada Brocky - English

  • Essay

  • The prompt: If you were going to visit a friend or family member out of town, would you prefer to stay at a hotel or their home?
  • Use details and examples to support your explanation.
  • There are some people who believe that a person when visiting his friend or family member, it's better for him to stay at a hotel.
  • However, I believe that an individual has to stay in their house in order for him to pass good time with them and enjoying every minutes of being around them, and also avoiding hurting their feelings.
  • First reason is that an individual should stay in the house of his friend or his family memeber during his visit is because of being much closer to them in order to take advantage on most of the time being spend there.
  • For example, last year when I went visiting my brother in another city that I live in, I stayed with him during the entire week, and I really enjoyed it being with him, and playing with his little kids most of the time, Hanging out at the evening, and eating dinner together, which brought in my mind the memory of the old days.
  • Additionally, a person who's going to visit his friend or family memeber is going to have a short period for most of the time, and it would be ashamed if he didnt take advantage of most of the time being around them.
  • The second reason for being in the friend's house or the family memeber would to prevent hurting their feelings and emotions, even if they succeed in concealing it.
  • Because, most of the people tend to be more hospital, and it wouldn't be good for not allowing them to be satisfied with managing your staying with them in that period of time, and taking care of you during your staying with them.
  • For instance, I remember few years ago, when I went to visit a friend of mine, and I booked for a hotel during that 3 days, and when he heard of what I did, he didnt like it, and start blaming me for not allowing him to take care of everything in that moment.
  • And I had to cancel the booking for that hotel, and went and stayed in his house during that period of time.
  • And He explained to me that, it wouldnt be right when an honored guess would visit you and let him stay away from you in that time.
  • And I noticed that he was very happy of making me part of his family, and eating and watching movies together, which was a memorable moments for me that I would never forget.
  • to sum, when visiting someone sometimes it's good to stay at a hotel, but when it comes to family memeber or a friend, the best thing is to stay in their house in order to pass the best moments during that visit.
  • And would leave a nice impression on them.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

  • Title
  • Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • However, I believe that an individual has to stay in their house in order for him to pass good time with them and enjoying every minutes of being around them, and also avoiding hurting their feelings.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
    • First reason is that an individual should stay in the house of his friend or his family memeber during his visit is because of being much closer to them in order to take advantage on most of the time being spend there.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
    • For example, last year when I went visiting my brother in another city that I live in, I stayed with him during the entire week, and I really enjoyed it being with him, and playing with his little kids most of the time, Hanging out at the evening, and eating dinner together, which brought in my mind the memory of the old days.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • Additionally, a person who's going to visit his friend or family memeber is going to have a short period for most of the time, and it would be ashamed if he didnt take advantage of most of the time being around them.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • The second reason for being in the friend's house or the family memeber would to prevent hurting their feelings and emotions, even if they succeed in concealing it.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
    • Because, most of the people tend to be more hospital, and it wouldn't be good for not allowing them to be satisfied with managing your staying with them in that period of time, and taking care of you during your staying with them.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
    • For instance, I remember few years ago, when I went to visit a friend of mine, and I booked for a hotel during that 3 days, and when he heard of what I did, he didnt like it, and start blaming me for not allowing him to take care of everything in that moment.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10
  • Ayat 11
  • Ayat 12
  • Ayat 13
    • And I noticed that he was very happy of making me part of his family, and eating and watching movies together, which was a memorable moments for me that I would never forget.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 13TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 13
  • Ayat 14
    • to sum, when visiting someone sometimes it's good to stay at a hotel, but when it comes to family memeber or a friend, the best thing is to stay in their house in order to pass the best moments during that visit.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14
  • Ayat 15