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Text from Caroline-mj - English

  • Reflect in the mirror

  • She looked her on the mirror to see it only her own reflexion.
  • A mouth, eyes, cheekbone, hairs.
  • Aound ten, around hundred of people could can describe her face on only few secondes.
  • It is present in thousand of presspaper.
  • And yet, this smiley face that everybody see in her identity, seems unfamiliar to her.
  • When she plunged into haze of other, she alway can distinguish a specific ray which belong to this personne ; the spark life to this personne, the soul profil of this personne.
  • But in her eyes was empty.
  • Empty of herself.
  • Empty of identity because of all this time where she forçed to have another identity.
  • The irritating light of bulb of her mirror begans to wobble.
  • The room begans to be darker.
  • Her shadows approached...
  • Or was her own shadow which émancipated ? No.
  • It was an other breath.
  • That was an other thing. She fel it. She saw it.
  • Hangs get out of shadow to fix upon her shoulder.
  • Freezing and bloody hangs...
  • extract of my text that is on the website :http://caroline-mjc.skyrock.com/ If you want the original texte that is in French for translation.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English