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My business
I'm estate agent and I can see and visit many houses, villas and appartments.
Discuss prices and to meet lawers, solicitors and others men lawers...
It's fascinating !

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- My business
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句子 1
- I'm estate agent and I can see and visit many houses, villas and appartments.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Discuss prices and to meet lawers, solicitors and others men lawers...
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- It's fascinating !
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