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Please, correct my mistake
Today the weather is good.
Many people would like this.
It's beautiful when sun is shining, sky is blue, and only one cloud appeared in the sky

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- Today the weather is good.
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- Many people would like this.
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- It's beautiful when sun is shining, sky is blue, and only one cloud appeared in the sky
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