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Text from Brocky - English

  • Why would you learn my native language?

  • Learning a new language is really beneficial for the people either they're workers or students or just normal people.
  • Especially if the language that the person is looking to learn is widely spread in the world.
  • In my view, learning my native language is really good for two important reasons.
  • First, you meet many people and make a lot of friends around the world.
  • This would definitely help in making a good relation with people and supporting each other especially in need.
  • When you want to visit a country that uses this language as an official language.
  • It would serve you a lot and make many things easy for you.
  • For example, when I started learning English language, it was really an amazing experience for me, and I meet hundreds of people across the world, helped me also with learning about different cultures and the people's way of life.
  • Which completely changed my mindset about the reality of the world, and I made many good friends, and we benefited each other while being closer to each other.
  • As you can tell, learning my native language would be definitely the best solution for you because it will help you making many new friends.
  • Second, by learning this language it will help to exchange great information with the people who speak it.
  • Information is an important factor in life, and getting this latter would increase you in knowledge and improve your way of thinking entirely.
  • For instance, when I was in university, I used to study with forigner students, and I used to hang out together with some of the friends, by discuss with them how they live their lives and what's their goals in life, and how they see this world.
  • It had an impact on me.
  • Also, whenever I need information on different aspects of life, I would just type in google seeking some answers on matters that is not been faced in my language, and I find that there are people who speaks this language who faced it, and share their experience with it.
  • This made me realize that there are many things in this world need to be discovered, and this would only come by learning different languages in order to be able to have the oppotunity to learn them.
  • So as you can see, learning a language would absolutely help you in exchange valuable information.
  • In conclusion, language has a great impact on our lives, and it's an amazing tool a person can learn and use it effeciently for its benefit.
  • Learning my native language will not only help you meeting new people and visiting different places in the world.
  • But would also help you in exchanging a valuable information with them, and bring solutions for your problems that you couldnt solve.
  • I would highly recommend you to start learning it, because you would never regret it, and you wont miss this great opportunity.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Learning a new language is really beneficial for the people either they're workers or students or just normal people.
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    • For example, when I started learning English language, it was really an amazing experience for me, and I meet hundreds of people across the world, helped me also with learning about different cultures and the people's way of life.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8
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    • Which completely changed my mindset about the reality of the world, and I made many good friends, and we benefited each other while being closer to each other.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9
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    • As you can tell, learning my native language would be definitely the best solution for you because it will help you making many new friends.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 10
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    • Information is an important factor in life, and getting this latter would increase you in knowledge and improve your way of thinking entirely.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 12
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    • For instance, when I was in university, I used to study with forigner students, and I used to hang out together with some of the friends, by discuss with them how they live their lives and what's their goals in life, and how they see this world.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 13
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    • Also, whenever I need information on different aspects of life, I would just type in google seeking some answers on matters that is not been faced in my language, and I find that there are people who speaks this language who faced it, and share their experience with it.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 15
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    • This made me realize that there are many things in this world need to be discovered, and this would only come by learning different languages in order to be able to have the oppotunity to learn them.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 16
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    • In conclusion, language has a great impact on our lives, and it's an amazing tool a person can learn and use it effeciently for its benefit.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 18
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    • But would also help you in exchanging a valuable information with them, and bring solutions for your problems that you couldnt solve.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 20
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    • I would highly recommend you to start learning it, because you would never regret it, and you wont miss this great opportunity.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 21