添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

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  • I was gone church and go back home Lately my city is very hot I need take a rest but I must learning languages I don't want will be stupid and don't learning English Because everyday I do talk to other countries peoples but I need practice English it's not silmilar mother tongue

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