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  • Can you correct me please

  • I think it was ten o’clock when every light turned down of the city, of the bordering villages and another one else.
  • I run to the square and I saw so many people watching though the sky I don’t know what but they were so quiet.
  • Every month there was a black out, we could see the stars in the sky, sometimes we could see some planets and some days ago I see when Jupiter and Venus came together it was amazing!
  • I live in a very polluted city so I’m so happy when the rain clean the air, after that we can see the Andes mountain range!
  • I’d like to live on the sea, one year ago I was living on an island, I really prefer that because you can see the sea every day and there‘re not pollution.

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  • 문장 1
    • I think it was ten o’clock when every light turned down of the city, of the bordering villages and another one else.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
  • 문장 2
    • I run to the square and I saw so many people watching though the sky I don’t know what but they were so quiet.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • Every month there was a black out, we could see the stars in the sky, sometimes we could see some planets and some days ago I see when Jupiter and Venus came together it was amazing!
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • I live in a very polluted city so I’m so happy when the rain clean the air, after that we can see the Andes mountain range!
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • I’d like to live on the sea, one year ago I was living on an island, I really prefer that because you can see the sea every day and there‘re not pollution.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5