添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Ignacio777からのテキスト - English

  • mini shorto storie THE KNIFE

  • The knife by Ignacio Bermúdez I walked the streets of the city and a man I push myself.
  • I fell to the floor.
  • I always carry a knife with me to protect myself against any criminals.
  • That day was no exception.
  • I panicked and did not hesitate to stab in the chest.
  • He fell to the ground.
  • People started screaming as she attended.
  • I began to despair and I ran ... I was nervous.
  • I soon fainted.
  • I opened my eyes after a few minutes.
  • Her stomach bloodstained.
  • I looked back, a man ran ...

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English