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  • Flat

  • I live in the suburb, in a high-rise building.
  • My flat is situated on the second floor.
  • It is not large, but convenient.
  • There two rooms, two balconies, kitchen and bathroom in my flat.
  • When you enter my flat, you find yourself in a long corridor.
  • The first door on the left leads to my room.
  • My room is sunny and light, because the sun often shines in its windows.
  • Also, the ceiling is painted white and walls are hung with an white wallpaper.
  • There are not many things in my room only bed, working table and cupboard.
  • To my mind, the most interesting place is balconies, because rubbish and dirt always prevail there.

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