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Text from Ignacio777 - English

  • NEW YORK

  • 1.—What do you like of New York? 2.
  • Everybody says it, knows it and sings it.
  • 'Oh, Autumn in New York!' 3.—It is true!
  • But what things are those that you love of New York?
  • 4.—because you can get tired of taking nice photos of Head office Park, while you see the sheets falling down and the first water drops fall down and …: Be enough!
  • 5.—Everything is orange because there are more pumpkins in the city that you present yourself.
  • 6.—To be present at a musical from Broadway, to spend one night in Times Square, to cover up and down the Bridge of Brooklyn, to enjoy of an evening of buys in the Fifth Avenue or to feel as a broker in Wall Street, are some of the things that can only be done in New York. 7.
  • —I coincide with you: New York is the only one.
  • It is the best city to visit or to live and also to die.

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