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  • I live in Mendoza is a city in western Argentina capital city with a population of 114,822 inhabitants.
  • It is one of the major cities of the country, being the Great Mendoza's fourth largest conurbation after Buenos Aires, Cordoba and Rosario, with 1,086,000 inhabitants.
  • It is the capital of the Province of Mendoza and is located in the plains to the east of the Andes.
  • It is a cosmopolitan city, due to the significant amount of immigrants mainly Italians, Spaniards, Arabs, Jews, Germans, etc. they came to Argentina at the beginning of the twentieth century, and currently by immigrants from countries in the region such as Bolivia, Chile, Paraguay and Peru.
  • It has a very wide range of cultural activities and an important nightlife, as the other major cities of the country.
  • It has a very important European influence, as the rest of Argentina, which is noted in the architectural styles, also wide avenues and tree-lined streets.
  • It is a tourist destination par excellence and a university center.
  • The advantages are the short distances from one place to another to opposite of the big cities, where it takes hours to get to work, i in just thirty minutes i can get to where I want it without problems.
  • It is also positive transit, there is too much traffic, we are also surrounded by mountains which makes our view something extremely beautiful.
  • Mendoza, since mid 2013 account with a bus tour, which runs through the city and the area surrounding the center mendocino.
  • More than anything is targeted at visitors who do not know relevant points in the capital city of Mendoza.
  • It should be clarified that this bus only runs through the city, to avoid confusion.
  • The Mendoza City Tour, is the official tourist bus of the municipality of Mendoza.
  • The disadvantages are that they are on the local economy, as the problems that beset the country in general, such as inflation and insecurity.

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    • I live in Mendoza is a city in western Argentina capital city with a population of 114,822 inhabitants.
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    • It is one of the major cities of the country, being the Great Mendoza's fourth largest conurbation after Buenos Aires, Cordoba and Rosario, with 1,086,000 inhabitants.
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    • It is a cosmopolitan city, due to the significant amount of immigrants mainly Italians, Spaniards, Arabs, Jews, Germans, etc. they came to Argentina at the beginning of the twentieth century, and currently by immigrants from countries in the region such as Bolivia, Chile, Paraguay and Peru.
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    • It has a very wide range of cultural activities and an important nightlife, as the other major cities of the country.
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    • It has a very important European influence, as the rest of Argentina, which is noted in the architectural styles, also wide avenues and tree-lined streets.
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    • The advantages are the short distances from one place to another to opposite of the big cities, where it takes hours to get to work, i in just thirty minutes i can get to where I want it without problems.
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    • It is also positive transit, there is too much traffic, we are also surrounded by mountains which makes our view something extremely beautiful.
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    • Mendoza, since mid 2013 account with a bus tour, which runs through the city and the area surrounding the center mendocino.
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    • More than anything is targeted at visitors who do not know relevant points in the capital city of Mendoza.
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    • The disadvantages are that they are on the local economy, as the problems that beset the country in general, such as inflation and insecurity.
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