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About my daughter
About my daughter I have 2 children, one boy and one girl.
My son is 7 months.
And my daughter is 8 years old.
This year, my daughter learn the third class of the primary education shool.
She is one of the class leader.
So she is aggressive and peronality.
A lot of friend in her class love her.
Each day, I go to school to pick her up, she always smile and kiss me.
I love she very much.

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- About my daughter I have 2 children, one boy and one girl.
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- My son is 7 months.
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- And my daughter is 8 years old.
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- This year, my daughter learn the third class of the primary education shool.
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- So she is aggressive and peronality.
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- A lot of friend in her class love her.
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- Each day, I go to school to pick her up, she always smile and kiss me.
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- I love she very much.
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