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Hello There
I just arrived from the church, now I will go to my girlfriend's home, in two days, will complete 3 years and 3 months together, stay with her is really gratefull.
By the away, thanks for all corrections, it's really helping me to be better writing.
May God be with you!

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문장 1
- I just arrived from the church, now I will go to my girlfriend's home, in two days, will complete 3 years and 3 months together, stay with her is really gratefull.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- By the away, thanks for all corrections, it's really helping me to be better writing.
  투표하세요!
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- May God be with you!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3