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Travelling
I’m working this summer to earn some money so i could travel.
I’m off to Equator to visit a friend i met in highschool.
He is a native who spend a year in France in order to learn french and he was in my classroom.
So we got along and we kept contact even after his left, 2 years ago.
While chatting on Facebook, he suggested me to come to his home during the holiday.
So i accepted and booked a flight immediately.
This is a really long flight of about 20 hours but i’m still excited to depart.

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- Travelling
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句子 1
- I’m working this summer to earn some money so i could travel.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I’m off to Equator to visit a friend i met in highschool.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- He is a native who spend a year in France in order to learn french and he was in my classroom.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- So we got along and we kept contact even after his left, 2 years ago.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- While chatting on Facebook, he suggested me to come to his home during the holiday.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- So i accepted and booked a flight immediately.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- This is a really long flight of about 20 hours but i’m still excited to depart.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7