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Text from Brocky - English

  • Pets should be treated like family members

  • Animals have an impact on the life of human being, there are two kind of animals, the one who lives in the wild, and the one that lives with the human being.
  • The latter one some people prefer to treat them nicely and consider them as a part of a family and treat them like family members, others prefer not treating them as family members.
  • In my opinion, pets should be treated like family members for two reasons.
  • The first reason is because playing with them is more fun, due to the fact that pets live with us in the same house, and they're most of the time close to us.
  • It's not fair to mistreat them just because they're animals, and not taking advantage of playing with them and walking them outside the house time to time.
  • For example, when I was 7 years old, I lived with my parents in a small town, I didnt have too much friends due to the majority of people are adult or old.
  • I had a dog, I used to take him outside with me walking together and playing with him, I enjoyed most of my time with him, especially when I feel lonely.
  • The only one who never abandoned me was my little dog, who used to try each time to play with me and make me laugh and enjoy my time that I spent with him.
  • Which helped me a lot psychologically to relax and overcome that lack of friendship that I had.
  • As you can see, pets are very important by helping lonley people to carry on their lives without being left alone and abandoned by other people.
  • The second reason is that most of the pets are helpfull in protecting the family from threats that may come from outside.
  • For instance, I remember when I moved with my parents to different area where I live, everything was strange to me, and time to time I pass through people who are being rude and trying to provoke me, untill once three of them came behind me when I was taking my dog outise and walking with him, they tried to tease me and steal my money.
  • I was helpless and couldnt defend myself before these gang's group.
  • And all of the sudden my dog jumped on the person on my right and throwed him down, and turend to the one who was hold me from the back and bite him in his leg.
  • While the third guy run immediately after what he saw what happened to his two fellow.
  • As you can see, pets are very helpful to their owners.
  • In sum, having a pet is vital thing especially in our time that we live in.
  • Some of the people argue that pets should be left outside the house and not treat them as family members.
  • I believe that pets should be treated as a family members not just because being with them is more fun but also they're very helpful especially when danger threats a family member.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • Animals have an impact on the life of human being, there are two kind of animals, the one who lives in the wild, and the one that lives with the human being.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • The latter one some people prefer to treat them nicely and consider them as a part of a family and treat them like family members, others prefer not treating them as family members.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • The first reason is because playing with them is more fun, due to the fact that pets live with us in the same house, and they're most of the time close to us.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • It's not fair to mistreat them just because they're animals, and not taking advantage of playing with them and walking them outside the house time to time.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • For example, when I was 7 years old, I lived with my parents in a small town, I didnt have too much friends due to the majority of people are adult or old.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • I had a dog, I used to take him outside with me walking together and playing with him, I enjoyed most of my time with him, especially when I feel lonely.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • The only one who never abandoned me was my little dog, who used to try each time to play with me and make me laugh and enjoy my time that I spent with him.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • As you can see, pets are very important by helping lonley people to carry on their lives without being left alone and abandoned by other people.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • The second reason is that most of the pets are helpfull in protecting the family from threats that may come from outside.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • For instance, I remember when I moved with my parents to different area where I live, everything was strange to me, and time to time I pass through people who are being rude and trying to provoke me, untill once three of them came behind me when I was taking my dog outise and walking with him, they tried to tease me and steal my money.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
  • Frazo 14
    • And all of the sudden my dog jumped on the person on my right and throwed him down, and turend to the one who was hold me from the back and bite him in his leg.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
  • Frazo 17
  • Frazo 18
  • Frazo 19
    • I believe that pets should be treated as a family members not just because being with them is more fun but also they're very helpful especially when danger threats a family member.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19