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  • Can you correct me please? or tell me if it hasn't sense please

  • It’s raining and I don’t know if I wanna go out there and walking under the rain I just want to get up on the top of a mountain and see how every raindrop falls over the city, see how every person is hiding from the water, see how can I think about every minute that is passing in front my eyes.
  • I was keeping away all these nights and I don’t know why.
  • I was lying on my bed when the echo of every word I read from my novel was telling me I have to go out there and feel every raindrop falling on my head, flooding my soul and fooling my mind ¿why should I do this?
  • ¿Why Am I feeling like I was lost on my own hometown?
  • I just wanna know!
  • But I had to wait until the sunset to catch it.

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    • It’s raining and I don’t know if I wanna go out there and walking under the rain I just want to get up on the top of a mountain and see how every raindrop falls over the city, see how every person is hiding from the water, see how can I think about every minute that is passing in front my eyes.
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    • I was lying on my bed when the echo of every word I read from my novel was telling me I have to go out there and feel every raindrop falling on my head, flooding my soul and fooling my mind ¿why should I do this?
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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