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Hello
My name is Dietmar and I'm twenty-nine years old.
My hobbys are swimming, skiing and archery.
I'm interestet also in working and playing with computer, but my two children have a other plan with me avery day.
I need English for school and for traveling around the world, but my family don't speak English.
Also I need somebody to learning new words and use the grammar in practice. See you soon. Dietmar

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- My name is Dietmar and I'm twenty-nine years old.
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- My hobbys are swimming, skiing and archery.
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- I'm interestet also in working and playing with computer, but my two children have a other plan with me avery day.
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- I need English for school and for traveling around the world, but my family don't speak English.
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- Also I need somebody to learning new words and use the grammar in practice. See you soon. Dietmar
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