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  • Hi, my name is Ale, I'm from Mar del Plata (Argentina), my english is really bad and I want to be corrected by this text.
  • In my country the national sport is the football (soccer for USA), Im a big fan of Gimnasia y Esgrima La Plata, is a Club wiht a big passion for the club, and the oldest Club in America.
  • I like read and view movies, the last movie i saw was a documentary of Elliott Smith called "Heaven adores you", he was a very sensible man and a great artist, when i saw the film was impossible to compare Elliott with Kurt Cobain.
  • Thank you, Ale.

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  • câu 1
    • Hi, my name is Ale, I'm from Mar del Plata (Argentina), my english is really bad and I want to be corrected by this text.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • In my country the national sport is the football (soccer for USA), Im a big fan of Gimnasia y Esgrima La Plata, is a Club wiht a big passion for the club, and the oldest Club in America.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I like read and view movies, the last movie i saw was a documentary of Elliott Smith called "Heaven adores you", he was a very sensible man and a great artist, when i saw the film was impossible to compare Elliott with Kurt Cobain.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4