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  • Hi Mark! How are you?
  • I am planning a 2 days tour in Paris, the capital of the France, I would like to go when there is the Paris fashion week because i love fashion. paris is certanly famous fot the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre mouseum, in wich there's the Monnalisa painting, the Palace of Versailles and the Arc de Thriomphe.
  • The actraction that i most want to visit is the Louvre museum because i love art and i think that it is one of the most beautiful and interesting museum in the world.
  • The second day i would like to visit the Palace of Versailles, it is a 1650 royal palace. i would love the hall of mirrorsand the extraordinary gardens!
  • So this is my plan, would you came with me?

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    • I am planning a 2 days tour in Paris, the capital of the France, I would like to go when there is the Paris fashion week because i love fashion. paris is certanly famous fot the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre mouseum, in wich there's the Monnalisa painting, the Palace of Versailles and the Arc de Thriomphe.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • The actraction that i most want to visit is the Louvre museum because i love art and i think that it is one of the most beautiful and interesting museum in the world.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • The second day i would like to visit the Palace of Versailles, it is a 1650 royal palace. i would love the hall of mirrorsand the extraordinary gardens!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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