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  • 5 days europe trip

  • hi Lore! How are you?
  • I was wondering if you want to come with me for a five day europe trip.
  • The first day i am planning to visit Paris because is quite near Italy, it would be fantastic to visit the Tour Eiffel and the Louvre museum because i love art, the night i will stay in an hotel near the Senna, there would be a fantastic view.
  • The second day i will stay in Paris and i'll go to Disneyland Paris. the third day i will travel to Valencia, in Spain, by train.
  • There i would like to visit the "Centre del carme" a museum of beautiful arts of Valencia.
  • I will also visit la "cattedrale di santa maria" because is a beautiful monument.
  • The fourth day i will travel to london by the eurostar, a train that travel under the English Channel, in London i would like to visit the British Museum and Buckingam Palace.
  • The fifth day i will have to come back to italy but i will stop in Amsterdam where i can see the house of Anne Frank, in the evening i will return to Italy. what do you think about it? would you like to come with me? answer me back soon

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    • The first day i am planning to visit Paris because is quite near Italy, it would be fantastic to visit the Tour Eiffel and the Louvre museum because i love art, the night i will stay in an hotel near the Senna, there would be a fantastic view.
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    • The second day i will stay in Paris and i'll go to Disneyland Paris. the third day i will travel to Valencia, in Spain, by train.
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    • The fourth day i will travel to london by the eurostar, a train that travel under the English Channel, in London i would like to visit the British Museum and Buckingam Palace.
      赶紧投票吧！
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    • The fifth day i will have to come back to italy but i will stop in Amsterdam where i can see the house of Anne Frank, in the evening i will return to Italy. what do you think about it? would you like to come with me? answer me back soon
      赶紧投票吧！
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