添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

FunnixOnからのテキスト - English

  • How to make things right !

  • Well,most of people today don't care about the soul feeding,the soul feeding means being a part of any religion,even you have a lot of money,a good salary or an expensive car,you will feel that you need something,something that you don't know,so that's why we see a lot of Actors and popular persons surrender ! for which reason ? its for their hungry souls !

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English

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    • Well,most of people today don't care about the soul feeding,the soul feeding means being a part of any religion,even you have a lot of money,a good salary or an expensive car,you will feel that you need something,something that you don't know,so that's why we see a lot of Actors and popular persons surrender ! for which reason ? its for their hungry souls !
      投票しよう！
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