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My family
My life is very happy but sometimes my sister scold me, my mommy never scold me but she my sister always scold me.
My daddy never scold me is more, he has a good relation with hers daughters.
Today, my girlfriend came at my home, she and my sister doesn't has a good relation, my mommy and Xiomy has a good relation.
I really like be at home with Xiomy, I like see movies, chat, play, to do slumber party......
Right now, we are on christmas holidays, then, today we go amusement park.
Later, I don't have any plan, because, I'll improvise, all for we don't come back home while my sister is at home.

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문장 1
- My life is very happy but sometimes my sister scold me, my mommy never scold me but she my sister always scold me.
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문장 2
- My daddy never scold me is more, he has a good relation with hers daughters.
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문장 3
- Today, my girlfriend came at my home, she and my sister doesn't has a good relation, my mommy and Xiomy has a good relation.
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문장 4
- I really like be at home with Xiomy, I like see movies, chat, play, to do slumber party......
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문장 5
- Right now, we are on christmas holidays, then, today we go amusement park.
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문장 6
- Later, I don't have any plan, because, I'll improvise, all for we don't come back home while my sister is at home.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6