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My little story
This story about girl, which would be ideal.
You say:"It's good!" No.
Ideals do not be.
She find ideal, and lose his individualism.
So, she become standart and boring girl.

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- My little story
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- This story about girl, which would be ideal.
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- You say:"It's good!" No.
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- Ideals do not be.
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- She find ideal, and lose his individualism.
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- So, she become standart and boring girl.
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