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Birthday of my colleague.
Today is birthday of my colleague.
We made a small party for her after working time.
One of us invite her to go out, and the others prepare birthday cake and some fountain candles at restaurant.
She is so surprise when see everyone and birthday cake.
We had funny time together.

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- Today is birthday of my colleague.
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- We made a small party for her after working time.
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- One of us invite her to go out, and the others prepare birthday cake and some fountain candles at restaurant.
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- She is so surprise when see everyone and birthday cake.
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- We had funny time together.
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