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My holidays
I love summer.I consider August is the best month to have a wonderfull time for holidays.I like to stay on the beach and travel around the world.
Always, I stay in Oropesa during three weeks with my family and one week I travel a other place differents to Oropesa.
The next summer, I would like travel to México or Egypt whith my parents and my boyfriend.
Last but not least, I like to keep one week in winter for practising sking and snowing because I like snow in December.

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- I love summer.I consider August is the best month to have a wonderfull time for holidays.I like to stay on the beach and travel around the world.
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- Always, I stay in Oropesa during three weeks with my family and one week I travel a other place differents to Oropesa.
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- The next summer, I would like travel to México or Egypt whith my parents and my boyfriend.
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- Last but not least, I like to keep one week in winter for practising sking and snowing because I like snow in December.
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