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In the middle of the night, the song of the river sounded less beautifuly than your voice.
Darkness arround us.
And the moon smiled us with her stars teeth.
I stole you a kiss.
Then whole of me disappeared.

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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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- In the middle of the night, the song of the river sounded less beautifuly than your voice.
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- Darkness arround us.
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- And the moon smiled us with her stars teeth.
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- I stole you a kiss.
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- Then whole of me disappeared.
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