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Văn bản từ Brocky - English

  • A question I would ask a famous person.

  • If you could ask a famous person one question, what would you ask? Why?
  • Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
  • Life is full of mysteries, when we dig more we tend to find more secrets about it.
  • There are a lot of people who found their ways in dealing with it, and achieving their sucess formula.
  • If I were to have the chance to talk with AJ Hoge, I would love to question him on what motivated him and drove to accomplish his goals perfectly.
  • This question would be asked based on two main reasons.
  • Firstly, Knowning the motivation that push people into realizing their dream is definitely one of the greatest keys that would help anyone to learn from it.
  • This is due to what reasearch has shown recentely that a person being in a surrounding of successful people would intreger something inside him, and drive him into his ambitions and objects in his life.
  • A lot of people hold enormous goals in their life, yet only few of them would get the chance to realize them.
  • The question would be asked is why?
  • There must be a reason behind this, how could possibly few individuals put something in their minds and go and get it, whereas others keep dreaming without taking any step further.
  • Many people would have known how to tackle the difficulites they are facing to make their dreams come true, if they had followed the steps of the successful people.
  • As you can see, knowing about the inspiration of the successful person would definitely help in allowing the individual who is struggling in realizing his thoughts.
  • Secondly, it is more fun when you get to know the ingrediants to success.
  • All what you have left is just finding the way how to adjust them to suit your current situation that you are living in.
  • It could turn the impossible of yesterday possible today by the motivation that you would get from knowning about other famous people who used to struggle more than you, and yet they found a way how to breakthrough.
  • For example, when I was attending high school in Batna 8 years ago, I wanted to learn English, and the method we were using in class was not attractive, and it was based most of the time on dealing with grammar beside the point of focusing on conversation or improving the listening skills.
  • So, it was boring and made me relinquish my dream of learning about English, because it was kind of impossible to deal with it, especially after the failure that I had in my exams.
  • After that, I had to move on to university which made me find the person who changed my life.
  • It was AJ Hoge, He was the guy that I found on the internet through his website, teaching how to speak English in an easy way.
  • I knew it by one year from that moment, I will have mastered English very well.
  • To conclude, we are living around many important people in our lives, and it would be a shame if not taking advantage from their experience, and learning from what motivated them to reach their goals.
  • In order to find a way to achieve ours and live happy with the tremendous pleasure we would have.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • There are a lot of people who found their ways in dealing with it, and achieving their sucess formula.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • If I were to have the chance to talk with AJ Hoge, I would love to question him on what motivated him and drove to accomplish his goals perfectly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • Firstly, Knowning the motivation that push people into realizing their dream is definitely one of the greatest keys that would help anyone to learn from it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • This is due to what reasearch has shown recentely that a person being in a surrounding of successful people would intreger something inside him, and drive him into his ambitions and objects in his life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • A lot of people hold enormous goals in their life, yet only few of them would get the chance to realize them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • There must be a reason behind this, how could possibly few individuals put something in their minds and go and get it, whereas others keep dreaming without taking any step further.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • Many people would have known how to tackle the difficulites they are facing to make their dreams come true, if they had followed the steps of the successful people.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • As you can see, knowing about the inspiration of the successful person would definitely help in allowing the individual who is struggling in realizing his thoughts.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
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    • All what you have left is just finding the way how to adjust them to suit your current situation that you are living in.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
  • câu 16
    • It could turn the impossible of yesterday possible today by the motivation that you would get from knowning about other famous people who used to struggle more than you, and yet they found a way how to breakthrough.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
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    • For example, when I was attending high school in Batna 8 years ago, I wanted to learn English, and the method we were using in class was not attractive, and it was based most of the time on dealing with grammar beside the point of focusing on conversation or improving the listening skills.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17
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    • So, it was boring and made me relinquish my dream of learning about English, because it was kind of impossible to deal with it, especially after the failure that I had in my exams.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
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    • It was AJ Hoge, He was the guy that I found on the internet through his website, teaching how to speak English in an easy way.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20
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    • To conclude, we are living around many important people in our lives, and it would be a shame if not taking advantage from their experience, and learning from what motivated them to reach their goals.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22
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