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about me
hi, my name is carlos castellano, I lives in caracas-Venezuela.
I want speak and write english, because I need for my jobs, I am a medical student in the Universidad Central de Venezuela. i twenty year old.
I have two sister, one lives in San Francisco-California and the other lives here, she is a nurse.
my english is very basic and need leard more.

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- hi, my name is carlos castellano, I lives in caracas-Venezuela.
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- I want speak and write english, because I need for my jobs, I am a medical student in the Universidad Central de Venezuela. i twenty year old.
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- I have two sister, one lives in San Francisco-California and the other lives here, she is a nurse.
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- my english is very basic and need leard more.
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