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Text from MARIA1996 - English

  • As I see my life

  • Every time I surprise how our life is short and unpredictable.
  • Sometimes, I really become sad when I understand that it will be 20 years very soon, but I have never done something great in my life.
  • I don't want to be old very much.
  • I wanna be always young, but it's impossible.
  • And now, as I'm quite young, I understand, thant I have manygreat opportunities, which I mustn't lose, or in any case I'll be not happy.
  • 19 years - it's a really good age.
  • First of all, I should continue to study well, I must find the special area, that I'll be intersted in and in which I would be able to achieve a lot.
  • Secondly, I wanna find a job, where I'll find good people, who can really advise me something about my future career.
  • Besides, I don't want to lose my friends, who are really cool, they cheer me up every time I have not good mood.
  • And I'd like to make up friends with many good people, who will be my friends during all my life.
  • And more than that, it' a good age to find my love.
  • So, I have really many plans for my near future, but I am really afraid of loosing many good opportunities.

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