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My first english post
Hello everybody!
I want to learn english since a few months, but I didn't found anybody who can help me to improve my english skills.
I like to read english novels, which genre is crime story or thriller.
I have some hobby that I like to do.
I go to a mechanical technician school in my country, but I prefer IT technology.
Can anybody help me to improve my english skills?

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- My first english post
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- Hello everybody!
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- I want to learn english since a few months, but I didn't found anybody who can help me to improve my english skills.
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- I like to read english novels, which genre is crime story or thriller.
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- I have some hobby that I like to do.
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- I go to a mechanical technician school in my country, but I prefer IT technology.
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- Can anybody help me to improve my english skills?
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