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Today I will do...
Today, i'm gonna eat an apple because i like apple.
But, it's true, i prefer chocolate.
If only the chocolate wasn't dangerous for the healthy !
I wanna eat a lot of chocolate !
Please, give me chocolate !
(I don't even know why i write this...)

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- Today, i'm gonna eat an apple because i like apple.
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- But, it's true, i prefer chocolate.
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- If only the chocolate wasn't dangerous for the healthy !
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- I wanna eat a lot of chocolate !
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- Please, give me chocolate !
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- (I don't even know why i write this...)
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