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My first redaction.
hello!
I wanted to talk about me.
I live with my parent, my sister, my nephews and my brother before because now he is in Germany.
I run everyday in the park, because I like sports.
I also like the games, watch tv and more thing.
What I like to travel north because I want see an aurora borealis in the sky.
I to see this I would be a wish.
I am from Spain, Here no aurora borealis but I like summer spain because is very hot.
I believe that I am rare because I like the summers very hot and winters very cold.
I don't travel with frequently but I wish in a future travel a lot.

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- My first redaction.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- hello!
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câu 2
- I wanted to talk about me.
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câu 3
- I live with my parent, my sister, my nephews and my brother before because now he is in Germany.
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câu 4
- I run everyday in the park, because I like sports.
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câu 5
- I also like the games, watch tv and more thing.
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câu 6
- What I like to travel north because I want see an aurora borealis in the sky.
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câu 7
- I to see this I would be a wish.
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câu 8
- I am from Spain, Here no aurora borealis but I like summer spain because is very hot.
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câu 9
- I believe that I am rare because I like the summers very hot and winters very cold.
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câu 10
- I don't travel with frequently but I wish in a future travel a lot.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10