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"I have graduated from university for 2 years.
Now, I am working for a company about export clothes to abroad.
I am a staff in Sale department.
My work is very buzy and presureless.
But, when I had a difficult problem, what I could not solve by myselt, my manager always gave me the best advise.
His name is Phuong.
He is good looking, intelligent and hard- working.
Fistly, He is good looking.
He is 34 years old.
He is 1.72 metres.
He possesses dark skin, bright eyes, square face.
His nose is straight.
He smiles look at him very friendly.
He has warm voice.
A lot of girls want to be his girlfriend.
Secondly, He is very intelligent.
He has graduated from Vietnam International University, Hanoi.
He can speak 2 languages that is English and Japan.
When he was a final student, there are a lot of company invite him to work for them.
He has been working our company for 4 years.
He can solve every promplem very fast and decisively.
He always knows how to do how to sign big contracts.
Last month, he signed a big contract and brought high profit to company.
Next month, he will meet a new customer in Japan.
This is a important customer of our company.
Third, he is not only intelligent but also hard-working.
Everyone in our company usually told that he was the man of work.
He always goes to office earliest and the final person leave off the office.
Until now, I have been working here 2 years, I have ever saw him absent anyday.
And he always works with passion.
Generally, we all admire him, we feel happy when we work with him.
I think he will be succefull in the future.
And I hope i can do good everything like him. ""
September 2015
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