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English is an international language
Hi, I'm YOUNES .
I'm 22 years old .
I'd like to speak english very well ,and I want to be fluency in english , because english is an international language and is understood all over the world ,in fact , in tody's world speaking english has become necessity .
More over with the globalization of trad , commerce ect ...

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- Hi, I'm YOUNES .
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- I'm 22 years old .
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- I'd like to speak english very well ,and I want to be fluency in english , because english is an international language and is understood all over the world ,in fact , in tody's world speaking english has become necessity .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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- More over with the globalization of trad , commerce ect ...
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4