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Is it okay?
Today i saw an incredibly superb endoscopic surgery.
What a good kind of present for my birthday!

SarcinaMarch 2013赶紧投票吧！
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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

标题
- Is it okay?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Today i saw an incredibly superb endoscopic surgery.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- What a good kind of present for my birthday!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2