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  • IELTS

  • So, at this moment I'm preparing for IELTS cause we're having this exam soon at my university, but also, I wanna get the IELTS' certification in order to get a good job.
  • Who knows, maybe in one year I'll already buld my carreer in a certain area or maybe I'll decide to continue my study in another country.
  • More than that, by preparing for the exam, you improve your language, it's always helpful, I must say, cause we live in the centure of information, where the English language plays quite an important role.
  • So, we have 2 lessons in a week at our university, but I spend more time learning it, as sometimes, I read English news or watch movies on this language.
  • It seems to me that I must pay more attention on listening cause sometimes it's quite hard to hear some words clearly.
  • Also, I must speak with foreigners more.
  • I consider that if you want to write this exam well, its better to do exrcises every day during minimum 30 minutes.

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  • 문장 1
    • So, at this moment I'm preparing for IELTS cause we're having this exam soon at my university, but also, I wanna get the IELTS' certification in order to get a good job.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
  • 문장 2
    • Who knows, maybe in one year I'll already buld my carreer in a certain area or maybe I'll decide to continue my study in another country.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • More than that, by preparing for the exam, you improve your language, it's always helpful, I must say, cause we live in the centure of information, where the English language plays quite an important role.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • So, we have 2 lessons in a week at our university, but I spend more time learning it, as sometimes, I read English news or watch movies on this language.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • It seems to me that I must pay more attention on listening cause sometimes it's quite hard to hear some words clearly.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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  • 문장 7
    • I consider that if you want to write this exam well, its better to do exrcises every day during minimum 30 minutes.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7