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sports today
hello!
I believe is very important today because it can uniting many people.
I loves running everyday but I hate the boxeo because is more violent and in my opinion too rude.
I think, the sports like running, swimming, baskeball, football, hockey, bycicle... it is the most fantastic because uniting many people and is very good for healt.

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- sports today
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- hello!
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- I believe is very important today because it can uniting many people.
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- I loves running everyday but I hate the boxeo because is more violent and in my opinion too rude.
  투표하세요!
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- I think, the sports like running, swimming, baskeball, football, hockey, bycicle... it is the most fantastic because uniting many people and is very good for healt.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4