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Texto de stacyzeng - English

Do you like the songs of Eminem?
Some rap will let let me feel some violence feeling,and some dirty words let me feel uncomfortable.
But the songs of Eminem , i haven't that feeling,I don't know why.
His songs like crying,and let me feel his sad and fear.
It let me feel that likes he need a person to protect him.
Do you hear his song called mockingbird.
If you pay more attention on its piano voice,you will find that his rap like crying,the image in my mind is a little boy keeps on running and crying.

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- Do you like the songs of Eminem?
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Oración 1
- Some rap will let let me feel some violence feeling,and some dirty words let me feel uncomfortable.
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Oración 2
- But the songs of Eminem , i haven't that feeling,I don't know why.
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Oración 3
- His songs like crying,and let me feel his sad and fear.
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Oración 4
- It let me feel that likes he need a person to protect him.
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Oración 5
- Do you hear his song called mockingbird.
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Oración 6
- If you pay more attention on its piano voice,you will find that his rap like crying,the image in my mind is a little boy keeps on running and crying.
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- ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 6